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	<title>Comments on: Not exactly&#8230;</title>
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		<title>By: deannahoak</title>
		<link>http://deannahoak.com/2005/02/17/not-exactly/#comment-108</link>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 17 Feb 2005 15:18:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Everyone's eyes do that trick--and it's worse when it's your own writing, because your brain knows exactly what you intended to be there. :-)

When I edit, I actually put my pencil on every single word. You can't move the pencil along in a line and expect it to work; you actually have to "dot" each word as you go.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Everyone&#8217;s eyes do that trick&#8211;and it&#8217;s worse when it&#8217;s your own writing, because your brain knows exactly what you intended to be there. :-)</p>
<p>When I edit, I actually put my pencil on every single word. You can&#8217;t move the pencil along in a line and expect it to work; you actually have to &#8220;dot&#8221; each word as you go.</p>
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		<title>By: iagor</title>
		<link>http://deannahoak.com/2005/02/17/not-exactly/#comment-107</link>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 17 Feb 2005 14:53:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Congrats on all the work - more work=more money, woot!

Deanna, can you throw some tips my way?  I am trying to edit my manuscript and I am reading right over the errors.  Especially with the missing words - my brain just fills in the blank and I don't see it. Like this "She glared at me with a kind stubborn defiance."  Is there any kind of trick I can do to find this stuff, or am I doomed to failure?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Congrats on all the work - more work=more money, woot!</p>
<p>Deanna, can you throw some tips my way?  I am trying to edit my manuscript and I am reading right over the errors.  Especially with the missing words - my brain just fills in the blank and I don&#8217;t see it. Like this &#8220;She glared at me with a kind stubborn defiance.&#8221;  Is there any kind of trick I can do to find this stuff, or am I doomed to failure?</p>
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