I’ve reread my entire story now, and I’ve made minor edits and rewrites, along with notes for where I think I may need more major edits. I’m going to sit on this for the next week while I work on a copyediting project I have in, and then I’ll get back to it fresh.
I'm a freelance copyeditor specializing in fantasy and science fiction. SF/F novels I have copyedited have been finalists for (and have sometimes won) the Hugo, Nebula, Arthur C. Clarke, Endeavour, Golden Spur, John W. Campbell Memorial, Quill, Locus, Philip K. Dick, British Science Fiction, British Fantasy, and World Fantasy awards. In 2007 I became the first and only copyeditor ever short-listed for a World Fantasy Award.